Friday, February 22, 2008

kah do

jhoote is jeevan kisson ki koi sahi baat tum kah do,

paani ko doodh nahi toh paani ko paani tum kah do,

rishton ki is jod tod main,jeevan saara beet gaya,

dil ka rishta faqat sachha, baaki jhoot hai tum kah do.

haar gaya sansaar, pyar ki paribhasha kahte har baar,

pyaar kaho radha ko toh deewani meera tum kah do,

ranjha-heer sohni-mahiwaal ishq ke kisse bahut sune,

pyaar bhagini ka,vatsal maa ka....

in shabdon ke arth tum kah do.

shastron avam upnishadon ne man ko itna daba diya,

man halka karne kuch boodhon ki shaitani tum kah do,

baanto dukh parayon ke, ponchho unke aansoo tum,

peer parayi ho doojon se, kuch aisi khusiyaan tum kah do...




some words for clarification-

faqat- kewal

vatsal- mamta

peer- dard

13 comments:

Unknown said...

paani me jo dikhti nahi wo Chhavi hain ye
Chhotu don naam hai inka kavi hain ye.......


Betu USTAAD ban gay tum ,,kya baat hai dear kuchh to bhi likhi hai.....

Anjul said...

Really nice poem with superb analogies....
meera aur Radha wali analogy mujhe bahut mast lagi yaar...

keep writing and sharing with us. :)

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kshitij said...

mast likhi hai...
variety of emotions involve karne ka concept bahut hi pyaara laga....

keep it up!!!!

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Keshav Kekre said...

nice work dear .........keep it up.

Greva said...

good but not as good as mine[:P]
kidding..
bahut gehrai in shabdon mein..
baki poems kab publish ker rahe ho???

Unknown said...
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jay's Blog said...

are yar kya kar raha hai... too to duniya se aage nikal gaya>>>>>

Saurabh Ektare said...

gud hai bhai....keep up d gud work.....

avi say said...

good dude..this is very fabuls.... outstanding thought...keep it up dude

jay's Blog said...

MIND BLOWING ONLY ONE WORD.... GOOD

avi say said...

yar itni achi poem kahan se likhna shikha ...thats very nice

Unknown said...

awesome wordings dear....!!cool...